Saturday, July 12, 2008

Afterglow


When music fades
Its whispering notes linger in the memory
As the sun sets
It tosses its dying rays into the sand and water

When stars fall

Their light streaks the sky for one second longer
Flowers fade away
But the sweet scent still drifts on the breeze
So day must turn to night
So summer turns to autumn
As the lullaby notes of the Lifesong Turn into those of a dirge
And the silver luster of platinum

Dims to dirty grey

Everything has an end

But nothing really wants to leave

Sometimes the afterglow of the memory

Is stronger than the original light

14 comments:

poo said...

hey..am not in to poetry really.. i can only handle it with beats on.. but I liked teh pics you have on the blog... if your own work.. then awesome..software and cam you use..

http://poonamparihar.com

Anonymous said...

Hi ,

I was reading ur blog posts and found some of them to be wow.. u write well.. Why don't you popularize it more.. ur posts on ur blog ‘Μ€ ΔŇĐ Μ¥ ŁΞ₣€’ took my particular attention as some of them are interesting topics of mine too; a good poetry depicting real life....

BTW I help out some ex-IIMA guys who with another batch mate run www.rambhai.com where you can post links to your most loved blog-posts. Rambhai was the chaiwala at IIMA and it is a site where users can themselves share links to blog posts etc and other can find and vote on them. The best make it to the homepage!

This way you can reach out to rambhai readers some of whom could become your ardent fans.. who knows.. :)

Cheers,

vicious said...

great words from ayoung heart!

reallyoldturlte said...

life is not always as dark as you think it to be.

cheers.

Sandeep Balan said...

"Everything has an end
But nothing really wants to leave"
i second that...u just penned what i have felt for year...too good..n that mast image..breathtaking bro..keep up the good work!

peter said...

hey man !!!!

awesm gud poem ....my self a poet too i can try to understnd all the shits that goes through our minds while writin these thngs !

gud wrk !

Small Hacks said...

great poem..great thoughts

Unknown said...

lovely poem!!

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Comfortably Numb said...

Sometimes the afterglow of the memory
Is stronger than the original light

I really like these lines!

Cheers!

Unknown said...

MARVELLOUS!!!!
A true POET in the making...

X said...

SO many bloggers are 17 these days!
is it a generation thing?
im 19, but few of my friends blog.
Loved the header, loved the title of your city. nice pics and cool poetry.
Where did you get the pics frum?
deviant?

Anonymous said...

last lines are the poetry actually...

it tells the story....

nice to see you carving a niche...but sometimes sentiments are being repeated.....shouldn't we try to be more versatile...

keep on

charbak

Unknown said...

Nice poem..loved it

angel from heaven said...

Lovely poetry.So down to earth yet so beautifully scripted.